Can you edit this paragraph? please!?

Outside of my window there is a nice garden and then after the garden there is a bench with a plaque on it but I can’t read what it says all the way from my window. After the bench with the plaque on it, there is a very, very, very big fence. There are tall telegraph poles all along it to hold it up. At the top, it curves inward and then there is a heap of barbed wire bales that looks very sharp. After the fence there is a lot of hard ground. In the distance on the hard ground there are a lot of little huts and small buildings scattered around the place. There are smoke stacks and soldiers at the huts and small buildings. The soldiers don’t do much except order a heap of people around. The people that I can see that aren’t soldiers are wearing striped pajamas and cloth caps. There are children on the other side of the fence except they don’t look like the sort of children I would want to play with.